Entwined Haiku

Fading eternal,
waking to heavenly light
That will be the day!

I had to change the first line - 'to eternity' made too many syllables.
 
That will be the day!
That you make me cry, That will.
Be the day I die.

I wonder if Buddy Holly ever intended that to be a Haiku *pondering expression*
 
I'm only one page
One line among the many.
Just one small fragment.

Are we having fun with this guys. Because I was thinking, if there was interest i could start up some other creative writing games. Let me know.
 
Just one small fragment
or one of many facets,
depends on your view.

Naw - this isn't fun.
It's like a poke in the eye,
but I keep doin' it.

(pronounced like 'dune' so it is only one syllable)
 
Ending misery
with a line of poetry:
Amicus Dei!

(Edit: My piano teacher has a book full of these and they're about 100 great works of literature all condensed into 14 syllables. It's actually quite hilarious.)
 
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Syllables to say
in Latin are separate
if they are vowels.

(If they are vowels
which are separate, of course,
not simply diphthongs.)


[Yes, it's 5. AH-mih-cuss day-EE]
 
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(You're supposed to use the last line of the previous haiku for your first line.)

But it is Your name,
Lord, which we worship daily
and owe all our thanks.
 
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