To Hell & Back "it is a long poem enjoy"

xavier55

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I hope you like this poem!

Hell, Pt. I
Scraping at the windows
Demons lurk in the shadows,
Hunting the dreams
That come to me.
How many hours
Since the last shower,
Since the last rain
Lulled me to sleep?
Please god save me,
Im trapped in hell
Above ground,
Im burning down.
Breaking the windows
Demons enter my room,
Rip away the sheets
Down to the bone,
Flesh flies everywhere
Neighbors stare
Locking their windows
From their terrifying fear.
Screams aren't heard,
Prayers, ignored.
Who is this empty house for?
Who lord?


Hell, Pt. II
Flame burst left and right,
Every scar on my skin
Burns with terrifying delight
As I descend into hell.
Gods hand turns to a fist
Punching me in the face,
Blood droplets fall with me
As I fall without grace.
Holy Scripture blares loud
And the light fades,
Prisoners in chains lurk
As I land in a pile of blades.
1 mile beneath the dirt
The devil takes my sins,
Rips them from my veins
And kills me within.
Every deep burning breath
Torches my lungs,
Vast lakes of fire signal
The end has just begun.


Hell, Pt. III
Burning eyes
My tears are dry,
Heat so intense
I can't cry.
Skin fries,
Every vein dies
Burning black
As demons fly by.
Angry screams shot
Like shotgun bullets,
Hitting my head
Fiery bolts of lead.
If this pain doesn't subside
Will I ever die?
Will I fade away
Like wind passing by?
Bullets on fire
Burn my ears,
How can I live
Dead all these years,
How can I survive
While burning alive?


Hell, Pt. IV
I see a hole,
Im taking it.
Hands outstretched,
I'm going to make it!
This is something
Satan can never take,
Freedom for me
Away from this lake,
From the flames
That haunt my dreams.
An escape from hell
And it's echoing bells,
Dry blood under my nails
And rotten flesh,
I know I'll never
Forget the horrible stench
Of death and rotting men,
Of betrayal and sin,
But if I can just once
Lay my eyes on the sea,
If I can just reach out
And finally feel free
Then it'll be worth it.


Hell, Pt. V
Lightning splits ground,
Bloody hands reach out,
I'm back for
A second round.
Screams echo outloud
Women and children run,
Sirens wail,
The chase has begun.
On my brow drops blood,
Eyes bloodshot,
Skin rough,
I splash through mud.
Behind me sirens wail
My heart pounds,
A piston pumping hard
In my ears, so loud.
Not free yet,
But never going back,
I'll die in a hail of fire
Before I do that!
Demons scream
And grounds steam,
Satan comes to collect me.
His hands drenched
In blood of the innocent,
Eyes as black as death
With yellow tint.
Breath stinks of flesh
And his whip in hand,
He chases me with the sirens
And the world fades to black,
Only hope on my heart
Keeps the sky blue,
And during this whole panic
I ask what would Jesus do?


Hell, Pt. VI
Run! Breathe!
Dream of the sea,
She says to me.
Her words
Pound in my mind
Like a relentless breeze
That yearns to be free.
God's angry wrath shows
And the clouds part,
Lightning strikes all around
The sea isn't far!
Keep pounding heart,
Keep pumping sweet blood!
The moon high overhead
Shines over the mountain top.
The hills are mud
And my feet slip,
I claw with my hands
As tendons rip,
Bones shatter
And veins scream,
It's not until I see it
That I realize
The pain is a dream,
So real but so fake
That it's almost fantasy.
Down below me
Sweet water shines,
Every ripple and wave
Is mine,
Peace finally
Thank god it's time.
On the horizon
The four horsemen ride,
Clouds split apart
And death flies,
His horrifying steed cries
And the demons scream,
Blood runs from my eyes
As I close them to dream
On last time.


Hell, Pt. VII
Oh sweet dream
Take me away,
Cities burn below
Like candles at my feet,
On every street
People scream,
Horsemen tear them,
Rip and shred them -
And I can see Agony.
Across the valley
Gods hand reaches
Saving his souls
From the spreading disease,
Satan himself looks at me,
Blames me for the second coming.
Mountains burn
And the moon melts away,
Rivers dry out
As blood fills the valley,
A great lake of death
Awaits me.
But to my back
My sea remains intact,
Far below my feet.
On the rocks
Waves crash,
My muscles relax finally.
On the right
The apocalypse in sight,
Raging like a wildfire
In the blackest night.
To my left
A sea for myself,
A world where I
Can peacefully die.
Quietly I close my eyes
Cross my arms
Over my chest,
Satan charges me
As the world burns,
There is nothing left.
Gods hand reaches out
Fingers scream for my blood
As I fall into the sea,
As I fall in love.

Suicide is a very serious subject, and there is no better escape than writing how you feel. If you have a hard time, TALK about it, write a poem and post it, people will listen when no one else will. Suicide is a very serious subject as well as a very serious mistake, don't cut yourself short.
 
Pt 1. I see a soul in faith turmoil.
Pt 2. Lol, Crucify him!!!
Pt 3. I don’t wanna go!
Pt 4. Go for the light!
Pt 5. Welcome back!
Pt 6. A look back at the dark side!
Pt 7. To know, will fortify trust, faith, and understanding in God ways and fear not.

Imaginative illustration of the tormented. Plucked from the gates of hell, washed in the water, wOOt by the blood of the Lamb, Jesus Christ!!!
Graphically scary poem PG-13
Good job portraying the dark side…Brrrr, its cold there though, could you send warm Light!
 
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wow. what can people say? you said it all already. you are a very talented writer. part of that sounds almost of what i have gone through. i agree though, its almost like a PG-13 poem. which of i have never heard. two thumbs up and a smile! :D
 
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