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  1. dorkelf

    Tek's Writing Challenge: cc.slim

    That's a very effective poem, nicely written. You start right away grabbing the reader's attention, and you made a good decision to vary "I died today" with "yeah I died today, and yeah I died today". Line after line your poem holds its own. I'd recommend changing "faced death under fire"...
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    MON night PvP 9/28, probably HEXWAY

    We need more people to come so we can have enough for HA. Therefore I have programmed this message so that you will automatically be visited by a persistent AMWAY salesperson if you do not show up for this week's PvP. Hate to take such drastic measures, but its For Teh Win. :D In all...
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    MON night PvP 9/21 HEXWAY, 7:30 PM EST

    Hi Tigress! My own play schedule is unfortunately set in stone, due to my current routine of work/sleep. But a lot of our regular PvP people can't usually play at the earlier time when I'm runnin PvP, including such PvP veterans as One2dredd and Derk. If one of your good GFC folks step up to...
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    Writing challenge for OCTOBER

    I was going to wait for October, but there's no good reason not to go ahead and get started!! This thread is now in the SUBMISSIONS phase. Please do not post critiques or comments until I post that it has entered the CRITIQUE phase. The story idea: Your character had to lose one of the...
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    Flash Fiction Writing Challenge: The Rules

    Great, thank you for considering it! If you accept this very little "writing challenge" every month, you will find that the combination of regular writing and giving/receiving feedback from others will make you a much better writer. It will also put you in the position of helping others...
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    Flash Fiction Writing Challenge: The Rules

    Thank you! I agree that the idea of a critique might prevent some people from participating or voting. But what I have in mind for a critique can be as simple as "Excellent story, it didn't grab my attention at first but then when grandma pulled the axe out of the Book Of The Dead, Illustrated...
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    MON night PvP 9/21 HEXWAY, 7:30 PM EST

    Necro Avenger and I practiced Hexway for Team Arenas the other day...its a very effective build there. I'm looking forward to seeing how it does in HA. So far I know Mirawyn and I will be there, and almost definitely Necro Avenger...Raven said maybe. If you know you'll be there tomorrow...
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    Flash Fiction Writing Challenge: The Rules

    Well there seem to be more serious writers here than ever before, so maybe its time for a new writing challenge! I think one of the most important things for an aspiring writer to do is to write regularly, and also to write different things...not just work on the same ol'...
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    Short apocalyptic story

    Hi Exo-Slayer! I couldn't help but notice the "moderator" title under your user name. Are you now moderating this forum? If so, congratulations! I think the first story you posted has the potential to be a real page-turner. Since you’ve invited me to critique, let me give you a suggestion...
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    MON night PvP 9/21 HEXWAY, 7:30 PM EST

    Here's the build: http://pvx.wikia.com/wiki/Build:Team_-_HA_Hexway If you are interested in coming, please post to this thread and let us know what you'd like to bring. The two ele slots and mesmer slot are spoken for, assuming that Raven, Firewalker and Mirawyn are able to be there...
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    Monday night PvP 9/14 7:30 PM EST

    As promised, I am organizing a PvP event. If we have no new folks we will focus on team arenas and try out some good current builds. Please bring a PvP character if possible and be ready to load up some build and equipment templates. If we do get some newbies, we might do some zaishen arenas...
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    Team SoE - Labor Day PvP!!

    Derk will likely be in the same boat...he usually can't log in till his kids are in bed. So maybe there can be an early group and a late group. Dredd might even be coaxed into playing if we have a later group. Not to mention his bros. :rolleyes:
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    Fissue of Woe (FoW) clear Event.

    Friday is always pesky - we are both stuck at work every Friday before Labor Day (for different reasons). We are going back and forth instead of staying there this year so we'll probably end up sleeping through the morning Monday sessions. Next year we'll probably stay on site again.
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    Team SoE - Labor Day PvP!!

    Mirawyn and I have definitely missed the fellowship of our wonderful guild. We've both wanted to get back into playing after an absence of several months, but one major thing after another gets in the way - most recently, we moved into a new house and are still nowhere close to getting our...
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    Fissue of Woe (FoW) clear Event.

    If you plan another one I will definitely try to come. FOW is fun! :) Paul
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    For the PvPers

    My favorite PvP to organize is AB - people can bring anything they want really, and in fact its a great testing ground for new builds. The only real drawback (as everyone knows) is the wait time, but I tend to just minimize GW, cue up some music, check my email, chat on TS, etc. while waiting...
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    PvP Tuesday 6/16 8:30 PM EST

    Well it was fun last week, so lets do some more Alliance Battles! Here's the info: Meet: In SoE Guild Hall at 8:30 PM Required: Factions expansion. No PvP experience necessary. Recommended but not required: Teamspeak (get it free at www.teamspeak.com), microphone (you can still use TS without...
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    The Alien Question part 1

    Your situation will be in my prayers Zeena. I'm glad you know God is in control. Times like these are when you can really draw close to the Lord and develop a trust in him that is more difficult when everything is comfortable and smooth. But you'll need support from your online friends as you...
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    The Alien Question part 1

    I guess it depends on what it means to be on the same page. To some, on the same page means that we must have no disagreements about politics or social issues. Certainly, disagreements about those things turn away non-believers. To others, we can disagree about those things, but not about how...
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    The Alien Question part 1

    I'm sure you have the best intentions, but I recommend that you approach arguments that disgust you with caution. When you get your emotions tied up in an argument (disgust is a very strong emotion) it is easy to let things come out that can be damaging to others and a stumbling block to...
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