rizz
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Afternoon all, not entirely sure what the do and donts of this forum section are. I dont recall seeing it before in the old days. Anyway.. I have over the years been into a bit of songwriting/poetry.. I used to play the guitar and attempted to compose a few of them. Sadly just the lyrics remain.
I would appreciate critique, my command of the english language is poor at best and i suffer from trying to rhyme in perfect segments instead of just writing fluidly.
I am looking to try and inspire myself into writing some more, so any comments or guidance would be appreciated.
Please check out the selection on my website, its the third window i think.
I would appreciate critique, my command of the english language is poor at best and i suffer from trying to rhyme in perfect segments instead of just writing fluidly.
I am looking to try and inspire myself into writing some more, so any comments or guidance would be appreciated.
Please check out the selection on my website, its the third window i think.